Friday, April 24, 2009

Check


I was checking my notebooks and I stumbled upon some poems I wrote in it. Here's one pakyut poem. Enjoy


Check
By Luis Batchoy

You check
Me out
And I check
You out
Checking me out.
You Check
Your Phone
I check
My pulse
And we both checked
Our watches.
Shall we just
Get our checks
And check
If you and I
Could check in.
Will this be
A double check
Or just another
Stale mate?

Oh well... KABIGAUN SAKUN!


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http://www.winterizingsecrets.com/

10 comments:

Aris said...

ang cute nito. simpleng malandi! haylavet! :)

The Zen Bitch said...

happy!

Yj said...

ikaw na ikaw.... kaya isang malaking CHECK....

wanderingcommuter said...

at sa dulo, PERFECT! 100%

corrected by: ewik!

bampiraako said...

kyut kyut! Isang malaking check ang entry mo.

Lagi kita ichecheck. hahaha

mel beckham said...

Kaya pala may 'checkinini' ka sa leeg. Bwahaha

Dawn said...

Double check!!!

hahahahahaha

Reesie said...

hahaha! ang ganda!

Luis Batchoy said...

Aris: simpleng malandi? parang ikaw yun ah?

Zen: Happy that you are.

yj: alam mo yan!

ewik: so elementary hehehe

Luis Batchoy said...

bampira: check na check... salamat sa pagbisita

mel: wala nga eh... lols

Dawn: mismo gurl

Reesie: thank you po